Every year several languages die out every year. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier when there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Every town has own culture and it known by the diffEvery town has own culture and it known by the different languages. However, today some languages are goes out. Many groups of thinker think that, small range of languages are made life easier. I partly agree with this statement. This essay will discuss both the views.
There are various reasons behind to vanishing several languages. Firstly, people are migrate different places of world from own culture because of several issues and for that it necessary for them to learn languages of these cultures. Moreover, one global language is easier to grow and built up a relationship with different region and their people and also easier to transfer knowledge with other people. Sometimes, people are taking long time for learning different languages and then they are not able to built up their business in other place which is far from their homes. For an example, In last few years, one small town people ware migrate to other city because of children higher studies. So,they are starting to learn languages of this city. Because of that some group of people think that, there are only few global languages are made easier their life.
However, sometimes vanishing language is effecting a culture. Every region has a own culture and other countries people are attracting and coming to show that culture. Sometimes, vanishing languages are effecting tourist economy. Many times different languages shows an uniqueness of the region and their people technic are not go outside.
To conclusion, I believe that different languages are important with one global languages. Because of that different place people are easily understand people and easily built up their relationship.erent languages. However, today some languages are goes out. Many groups of thinker think that, small range of languages are made life easier. I partly agree with this statement. This essay will discuss both the views.
There are various reasons behind to vanishing several languages. Firstly, people are migrate different places of world from own culture because of several issues and for that it necessary for them to learn languages of these cultures. Moreover, one global language is easier to grow and built up a relationship with different region and their people and also easier to transfer knowledge with other people. Sometimes, people are taking long time for learning different languages and then they are not able to built up their business in other place which is far from their homes. For an example, In last few years, one small town people ware migrate to other city because of children higher studies. So,they are starting to learn languages of this city. Because of that some group of people think that, there are only few global languages are made easier their life.
However, sometimes vanishing language is effecting a culture. Every region has a own culture and other countries people are attracting and coming to show that culture. Sometimes, vanishing languages are effecting tourist economy. Many times different languages shows an uniqueness of the region and their people technic are not go outside.
To conclusion, I believe that different languages are important with one global languages. Because of that different place people are easily understand people and easily built up their relationship.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , they
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...y. Many times different languages shows an uniqueness of the region and their peop...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...y because of children higher studies. So,they are starting to learn languages of this...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...y. Many times different languages shows an uniqueness of the region and their peop...
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Suggestion: gone
...region and their people technic are not go outside. To conclusion, I believe that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 13.1623246493 258% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2880.0 1615.20841683 178% => OK
No of words: 553.0 315.596192385 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20795660036 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84932490483 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51551305265 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.260397830018 0.561755894193 46% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 913.5 506.74238477 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 16.0721442886 224% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1676853012 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3611111111 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.47222222222 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 21.0 3.4128256513 615% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255200163345 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870825260205 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452511912203 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151345826732 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743376915305 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.98 8.58950901804 70% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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