Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or this agree with this opinion?
In a world where technology has developed so much that integration has almost erased all boundaries, more and more cultural values are beginning to disappear, including some ancient languages which have lasted for centuries. Many people hold the belief that this is an inevitable consequence, and that it would be in the near future when we will only use one language to communicate. My opinion, however, is that such unique values should be preserved along with humanity's development.
First and foremost, the disappearance of several languages may not seem to initially exert a huge influence but will soon corrupt the balance between communities worldwide. In simpler terms, each country or group of people have their own languages, and it is this diversity that creates a balance between them, as each has their own cultural practices and values which need to be protected. Were any of these to die out, any related information, ideas or experiences would also be wiped out of existence forever.
Moreover, it not would be reasonable to say that fewer languages can help create easier communication between people. Over thousands of years, communities have developed their own language to convey all their information or emotions, which means that each language has different features and characteristics that cannot be replaced. Switching to use fewer, or even one language, could be extremely challenging on the grounds that it could never adapt to fully express everything.
However, some people believe that the disappearance of several languages are completely acceptable, and that this is a result of natural selection. It is their opinion that the human society will never stop evolving, and on its way of progress, there will be some languages which need to be omitted since they no longer have the ability to contain the increasing amount of information created. New ones, as a result, will be invented in order to fulfil this task, and to make communication between us all more effective.
In conclusion, despite the fact that languages will die out at a certain time, I believe we should try our best to save as many as we can to maintain such cultural diversity that has been built up since the early ages of human history. All languages that were ever created somewhat contributed to the development that we have now, and we should preserve them not only as a means of communication, but as proof of our path to this developed society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03892944039 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8558217314 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525547445255 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9938346381 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.928571429 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3571428571 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281956807741 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102458894372 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461522736866 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163643107655 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478329283152 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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