Everyone deserves to be educated. It is unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background. University education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree?
A developed country requires a large amount of highly qualified workforce so education has become an essential part in developing policy. However, university is so abstract for people who jave financial issue. It is argued that students need to be set free that they can pursue their college desires. I strongly agree with this notion because of these following positive consequences.
First of all, free education releases more promotional chances for students having difficulties. Young people just need to focus on improving their major without worrying about funds. Moreover, they can afford a lot of expensive specialities such as doctor or sciencetist and make all of their efforts to achieve their dreams. Therefore, free tuition facilitates for teenagers' lifework and sustainable growth of nation.
Secondly, eliminating fees helps miserable pupils decreasing the financial burden with their family. Beside school fees, accomodation and transportation also cost a item of money in case they study for years. Therefore, money from their part-time job can exclude the subsistence expenses and other spends without thinking of funds. Moreover, scholarship is a method to find out talents and give more motivation for students to struggle and become an excellent citizen.
In conclusion, free education creates fascinafing conditions for hopefully successful path of younger generation. It also expands great achievements for governments which in the way raising their own position.
- Children are generally more successful in foreign languages study than adults Thus it is better to learn languages in childhood Do you agree or disagree 61
- Everyone deserves to be educated It is unfair that intelligent people are not admitted to private universities because of their financial background University education should be free for everyone Do you agree or disagree 56
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read anything they want online without paying 85
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67857142857 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9599257954 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700892857143 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1911851139 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214611663838 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673491579562 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410802532163 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125446812571 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493380199955 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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