Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet Do you agree or disagree

It is argued frequently it is better to eat vegetables always and Shouldn’t eat meat at all.I completely disagree with this opinion and i think there should be a balance in variety of food.

First of all the nutrients we get from meat are also very important for our body.we get a huge amount of protein from meats.For example one of my friend used to be a vegeterian so he used to skip meat but later he was suffering for it,that's why It's important to have meat in meal too.In the other way if people Doesn't eat meat then It's gonna mess up the eco system of environment. There will be plenty of animals in the forest it will ruin the habitat of thousand of years.so that's why eating meat is also important.

Secondly,own food preferences also matters.we can't force people to eat vegetables only.Again the taste buds of peoples also matters. There should be vegetables too in the meal but balanced with meat because different type of food nutrients are important to body.For example we are eating vegetables only then from which source we will get protien from that's why there should be meat also there in a diet plan.

To conclude I think that everybody becoming vegetarian Isn't important. They can eat meat too.overall a balanced diet with Different nutrients is most important for me.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73127753304 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60651527316 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546255506608 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.955772724 49.4020404114 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.428571429 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178189332611 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939803796443 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402825528216 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127454834473 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314619860027 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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