It is true that the number of vegetarians is increasing nowadays. While some argue that it is unnecessary to have meat in a healthy diet, I still believe that this is a narrow perspective and I completely disagree with this statement.
There are several reasons why people might argue that becoming vegetarians is beneficial. Firstly, vegetarians do not eat foods that are produced by killing animals. Many people choose a vegetarian diet for moral reasons owning to the fact that they suppose it is unnecessary to kill animals for food. Secondly, there is an abundance of people who question the treatment of animals in factory farms, which is why vegetarian diet is chosen for improving health problems. Another reason is that a healthy diet is possible without meat. This kind of meal may reduce the risk of disease like cancer, for example.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of vegetarian diet without meat appearance that should not be underestimated. One major reason is that vegetarians do not eat a balanced diet. In many cultures, meat, which contains a lot of nutrition, is the main ingredient in traditional meals. Besides, meat-eaters might argue that animals are below human in the food chain. As a consequence, it is completely natural for us to kill them for food. Furthermore, our aim should be improving farming methods as well as producing organic food.
In conclusion, for these reasons mentioned above, I believe that the drawbacks that we can reap from vegetarian diet without meat outweigh the benefits it has.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05447470817 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83940068469 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3496392962 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4666666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26510718833 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930820594602 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730338355319 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155558136712 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410915532316 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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