Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to ear meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that every people advisably become vegetarian since they could enjoy a healthy diet without meat. While I agree that eating only vegetable might improve people health, I do not agree that everyone should stop eating meat in order to become healthier.
There are a variety of reasons why people vegetarians are able to have a good health. First, Many scientific investigations have demonstrated that the health benefits of vegetable nutrition are enormous, which contains diversified sources of vitamins and minerals that our body require for daily activities and wholly development. Hence, vegetable can totally replace meat to become a primary source of nutrition. Second, the elimination of meat from the pattern of eating is ideal for treating and preventing from treating obesity and diabetes. For instance, the combination of clinical prescriptions and vegetarian diet prepared based on scientific studies could considerably ameliorate the medical condition of diabetics, perhaps even recovering from it.
However, I disagree with the idea that everyone should become vegetarian. The first reason is that meat included in a diet does not mean that it is unhealthy one if meat, vegetable and other ingredients are mixed reasonably. It is, therefore, hardly surprising that people could enjoy a healthy diet including meat. Another reason is it is relatively complicated to prepare a vegetarian diet that provides both sufficient nutrition and delicious taste, meanwhile using meat as an ingredient for diet is easier and quicker to cook. Spending too much time on preparing a vegetarian diet also indicates the fact that vegetarian is unsuitable for the majority of modern people who are so busy at work.
In conclusion, albeit becoming vegetarian might bring about a huge number of benefits, I believe that it is unnecessary for everyone to stop eating meat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41016949153 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89284648027 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.873747135 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.769230769 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316939178596 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114964445566 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735098022848 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193536026683 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868360276799 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.