In last decades, vegetarianism has become the mainstream of many societies. In contrast, wholesome diet side that meat is necessary for body organs to work. I personally, do believe that everyone should adopt plant-based food diet.
There are several benefits to following a vegetarian diet. Vegetable-only diet is healthier because of less cholesterol intake; as a result people will be less likely to develop health problems like obesity, stroke and heart diseases. Moreover, nowadays, a lot of meat’s and fish’s quality has deteriorated over years. Fishes are contaminated due to water pollution and meats are full of hormones which have been injected to animals. Human beings who consume these poisoned meats are vulnerable to poison by infections accumulated in meats which don’t disappear in half-cooked ones. In addition, health benefits are not the only reason to lead to a vegetarian diet. Since raising animals in factory farm conditions is not fair, by obtaining our food from plants we are able to stop cruelty to animals.
Besides, turning to a plant-based food is beneficial for environment because of less production of pollution and less consumption of water. Researches have shown that animal care outputs more emission than transportation. Another reason which is contributed to pollution by breeding of animals is that, beef productions use water 100 times more than that of vegetables’. Considering concerns about drought in most countries around the world, less consumption of water is a positive point for vegetable based foods.
To sum up, based on above- mentioned points, advantages derived from following a plant- based diet overshadow those of wholesome one. Thus, it is advisable to turn to a vegetarian.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t is advisable to turn to a vegetarian.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in contrast, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46153846154 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0967614432 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0096616007 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174434303901 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060690645526 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549201717853 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111495933249 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086272950067 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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