Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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...datory for all children up to a specific age. In India this is 14 years of age. I...
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...ry for all children up to a specific age. In India this is 14 years of age. In t...
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... age. In India this is 14 years of age. In the uk and many other countries it is 1...
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...he uk and many other countries it is 16, although the uk government now has plans...
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...k and many other countries it is 16, although the uk government now has plans to rais...
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...to raise the school leaving age to 18. I agree that children should be in school ...
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...aise the school leaving age to 18. I agree that children should be in school till ...
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... age of 18. In the following paragraphs, I intend to put forth my arguments to su...
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...ol leaving age to 18 is that, the age of 14-18 is the most impressionable age of ...
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...child's life. During this period of adolescence, the children undergo physic...
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...physical and hormonal changes because of which they are under a lot of pressure. ...
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...ical and hormonal changes because of which they are under a lot of pressure. there...
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...ical and hormonal changes because of which they are under a lot of pressure. there...
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...which they are under a lot of pressure. therefore, lengthening compulsory schooling he...
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...refore, lengthening compulsory schooling helps protect childhood. While at school...
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...re, lengthening compulsory schooling helps protect childhood. While at school stud...
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...y schooling helps protect childhood. While at school students will be protected fr...
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...dents will be protected from some of the pressures in life. they have the rest of...
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...s will be protected from some of the pressures in life. they have the rest of adulthoo...
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... from some of the pressures in life. they have the rest of adulthood to work, mak...
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... adulthood to work, make budgets balance and make choices. providing them with sp...
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...lthood to work, make budgets balance and make choices. providing them with space...
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...ke budgets balance and make choices. providing them with space to grow for as long as ...
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...pace to grow for as long as possible can make them better prepared for adult life...
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... to grow for as long as possible can make them better prepared for adult life. ...
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...e opportunity to acquire more skills and therefore more options. it has been show...
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...portunity to acquire more skills and therefore more options. it has been shown many ti...
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...portunity to acquire more skills and therefore more options. it has been shown many ti...
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...e skills and therefore more options. it has been shown many times that those wi...
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...en shown many times that those with more education find it easier to find work an...
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...t they are more likely to find that work satisfying. What is more, raising the sc...
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...ey are more likely to find that work satisfying. What is more, raising the school-leavi...
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...l-leaving age is a crucial investment in societys future. Doing so increases the ...
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...aving age is a crucial investment in societys future. Doing so increases the economic...
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...nomic potential of the future workforce, and so will bring increased tax revenues...
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...nding the period of compulsory education requires a huge investment in teachers, ...
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...rs, books and new school buildings which would be very expensive. they also say t...
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...books and new school buildings which would be very expensive. they also say that m...
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...dings which would be very expensive. they also say that many families need their ...
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...hat many families need their children to make an economic contribution to the fam...
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...family income and working early can help these families to survive. Finally, just...
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...ly income and working early can help these families to survive. Finally, just bein...
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...eing in school does not guarantee that a student is learning. Unwilling students ...
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... in school does not guarantee that a student is learning. Unwilling students become ...
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...come disruptive and damage the education of others in their class. To put it i...
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...at, as every garden has weeds, similarly compulsory schooling also has some drawb...
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...as every garden has weeds, similarly compulsory schooling also has some drawbacks. Howe...
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... drawbacks. However, these drawbacks are nothing as compared to the vast benefits...
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...s this approach would bring and the cost needed to implement would be negligible ...
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... compared to the huge economic potential of the future workforce. therefore, I be...
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...pared to the huge economic potential of the future workforce. therefore, I beli...
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...c potential of the future workforce. therefore, I believe that everyone should stay in...
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...hat everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen.
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...everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72222614536 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524509803922 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7479869667 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6363636364 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 32.0 4.38176352705 730% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 55.0 5.01903807615 1096% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204565306883 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680292339288 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109703002599 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522091735801 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822186902504 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.