Excessive sugar consumption causes many diseases. Some people think that it is the government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption while others think that it is the individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views.
These days victimization to serious diseases as a consequence of limitless consumption of sugar is a common happening. There is an ongoing debate whether government or individuals should act to control this problem. This essay will analyze both aspects of the argument before reaching to a valid conclusion.
The major reason to support the opinion favouring the state is that governing bodies are the ones, having absolute power to implement any change, which can not be opposed by the public. This makes people obliged to follow any new law and legislation that is enforced. Thus, the efficacy of adopting any measure becomes substantially high, which is extremely good for results. What is more, a tax on sugar can be imposed, which will make the prices of the commodity skyrocket. In turn, less sugary products will be available to be afforded by populace. Thus, governmental efforts ensure success at a larger scale. To cite an example, a few years ago a hefty duty was levied on tobacco in India which resulted in a significant fall in its usage.
On the other hand, multiple reasons exist to favour the view of individual approach of addressing the problem. Firstly, self-governance of a person’s lifestyle is the main factor which causes the governmental measures to fail. Until the individuals feel like improving their fitness by limiting sugar intake, every other step will go in vain. Therefore, free will holds the key for prevention of diseases occurring due to unprecedented sugar intake. Moreover, individual consciousness is more effective to control this issue in every age group. As young aged people are not sufficiently able to understand the policies devised by the regime, only elders can guide them through the situation that this habit can cause.
To conclude, an alarming situation has emerged due to high sugar intake, which needs to be addressed at both government and personal level, since without cooperation of public every effort of authorities is futile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
These days victimization to serious diseases as a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in fact, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1975308642 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88967357709 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626543209877 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9380663411 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0588235294 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158573423045 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461626921123 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441834539029 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093821430985 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048389688776 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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