Some scientists state that the more time older people spend for communicating and doing exercise, the more benefits they can gain in their life as being tougher and more joyful. On the other hand, although they are individuals who need taking care the most, many of them are still facing with a decrease in healthy rate and living in abandoned environment. This essay intends to delve into some reasons why this is occuring, and put forward solutions to tackle this problem.
There are numerous factors which can cause this trend to elder people. To begin with, by having affected by social preconception in the past
, grandmothers are still in thought that they have to be the one who are in charge all the household chores, from sweeping and cleaning the house, cooking meals to taking care of their grandchildren. As a result, it creates a habit for the elderly people, therefore they do not want to spend time getting along with others and doing other kinds of physical activities to enhance their health anymore. Another reason is that why enormous elders have changed their minds to be adequate with modern life styles, others are keeping their mind in the past time and refusing to accept new changes on society, plus with strict mindset and harshful attitudes, it is hard for them to find someone who have the same opinions to make friend with.
Some solutions can be taken to solve these downsides. First of all, local government can arrange clubs for older people to communicate and enhance relationships between them. Those places can also create opportunies and encourage them to participate in many outdoor activies like slow-running or soft volleyball competitions, which can improve their quality of health. In addition, the young generation have to take responsible for caring the old people.
To sum up everything that has been stated so far, I believe that the main factor which causes this trend to the older is the lack of responsibility and care of society. Howerver, we must all realise that numerous actions should be done to give older residents a better living environment.
- Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier However many ealderly are suffering from lonelyness and lack of fitness Discuss the cause and solution 89
- Some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor people and rich people Others think it is having an opposite effect Discuss these points of view What is your opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97450424929 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60799797165 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5933703312 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.076923077 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160079155838 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546199954143 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344264102657 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804826252 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349344141491 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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