In this twenty first century, the damage that we cause to the environment soaring like never before. However, the governments as well as people can do a lot to curb this menace and save our planet from potential dangers . This essay points out some major threats that human beings posing towards the environment and also suggests some remedies to solve these problems.
To begin with, the major threat to our planet and environment is now global warming, which increases year after year. If the temperature rises in the future, the lives in the planet will be extincted forever. The main cause of global warming is vast use of fossil fuels in the vehicles and other machinery. The more vehicles on the road, the more pollution to the environment . Another factor is, duet o deforestation our planet is facing severe climate changes and natural habitat of many animals in the forest facing extinction now. Moreover, the mushroomed industrialization bought more pollution in water and air especially in the cities.
However, there are some practical remedies for these problems , which governments and individuals can do. Firstly, governments can control the number of vehicles on the road with heavy tax . By doing this the number of vehicles, which are using fossil fuels will come down and eventually the pollution due to fossil fuels also decreases. This tax money can be used to implement other forms of energy , which is not harmful for the environment . For example, London city recently implemented public transport buses running on battery power. Secondly, laws against deforestation should be strengthen so that the incidents of cutting down trees will be reduced. Similarly, people also can contribute their share in reducing environmental damage. People can leave their private cars and use public transports in order to commute to work. Another thing people can do is, they have to use other materials for building house and furniture instead of wood. This will minimize the number trees cutting down globally.
To conclude, the damage to the nature by the human beings is severe, however these problems can be solved, if the governments and people take initiative to solve this problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, well, another thing, for example, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13687150838 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68621619696 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6302287801 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.95 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266948979988 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081056445249 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102599233406 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166308144099 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938762181056 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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