In some countries, especially, in developed nations students often take a year gap after their schooling in order to travel and make money for their further studies. There are some benefits as well as drawbacks for this trend. This essay will examine both advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Perhaps the major advantage of taking a year off after schooling is students can travel to different places during this year. By travelling different countries, students can enhance their knowledge about the world and different cultures this will refresh their minds and makes them more mature. Students in schools are often innocent and they do not know what is happening in outside world. However, if they take one year gap after schooling for travelling, it will help them to acquire knowledge about the world, different kind of people, cultures e.t.c. Another important point is, working in this one year gap is benefits students in terms of money. As education is expensive today, this money is helpful for their future studies,. For example, in some countries in west students work and travel this year off in order to travel and make money for their university education.
There are, of course, negative aspects for this trend . The greatest of these is that students may distracted from their studies and they will not show any interest to join in university after this gap. Some pupils will find this travelling life enjoyable and they will come to a decision that not to join in universities for further studies. Another possible issue is, students are too naive and they do not know the hypocrisy happening the outside world. While travelling and making friends , they may be end up in some bad company and this might risk their life. For example, there are many examples in my home city where school children became part of the sex racket and other social groups because of the freedom they got at a very young age.
My conclusion would that this is a well balanced issue. There are probably an equal number of pros and cons to making either choice. And i suggest to parents and teachers to close monitor their children even though they are on a year gap for travelling and other purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, kind of, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41777442959 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.561755894193 90% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9957263201 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.944444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282763013894 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104781137879 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633474667467 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188418389139 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644286392606 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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