It is true that many environmental problems are extremely attributed to human beings. This essay will discuss the negative effects and possible measures that governments and individuals could take to tackle these problems.
There are several drawbacks of human activities to the environment. Firstly, the main issue is that there is an increasing number of deforestation. As a result, numerous animals lost their habitats, and have to move to other places with unsuitable conditions of living, which is supposed to be a reason behind the death of many rare species. Moreover, the decrease of trees leads to less amount of carbon dioxide absorbed, deteriorating the atmosphere and escalating the effect of global warming. Another problem would be an increase in waste and rubbish thrown away by humans. In fact, this activity results in more dirty areas, thus people are more worried about surrounding sanitation, affecting their quality of life and daily activities.
However, there are various steps that governments and individuals could take to address these problems. Firstly, the government can increase people’s awareness about their actions on the current issue and implementing more laws to preserve the environment. For example, such damaging actions on forests must be strictly prohibited and culprits are punished severely. Therefore, forests are protected and wild animals could still live in these areas. Besides that, individuals need to put garbage in the right place. In addition, people can clean their living areas around together. Thus, their streets are clean and the quality of life could be improved.
In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49626865672 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83686891475 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4587898161 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163389958642 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514634234174 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434629350987 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962711455531 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046401565065 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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