In the modern age, the development of humanity has taken a heavy toll on the ecology which is also synonymous with deterioration of environmental quality. For this phenomenon, several reasons are being put on the plate, and feasible measures are recommended to be taken promptly.
There are two factors acting as the main culprits behind the current trend. First and foremost, it is solely due to the enormous energy consumption in production are verging on excess. In fact, massive exhaust emissions released from the combustion of fossil fuels and fuel- powered vehicles which have catastrophically exacerbated air pollution resulting in serious health problems. For instance, Hanoi capital, in recent years, has seen an increase in the number of private vehicles and its impact has rendered the atmosphere alarmingly contaminated. Second, deforestation and destroying natural habitats are occurring at a larger scale than ever before due to people’s need for more land to solve overpopulation in cities. Consequently, erosion will occur more frequently through excessive rains and flood, let alone loss of habitats.
Urgent actions are called for to put a halt to the trend of environmental pollution. One is that the governments could provide some new laws about restricting the construction of factories and fuel- powered vehicles which is key to declining climate change. For example, the governments can pass legislation to nudge nationals towards using hybrid vehicles will help cutdown on the volume of toxic exhaust fumes. The second proposal suggests that raise people’s awareness about environmental degradation should be intensified. Once people are aware of environmental destructive activities and their repercussions, they would be had more sustainable lifestyle choices such as planting more trees to build a greener world for the future.
To conclude, it is of my opinion that the planet is alarmingly contaminated by human activities. Therefore, the governments and citizens should adopt viable solutions to improve environmental quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59744408946 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14827011091 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658146964856 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4532102833 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835920456516 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0246390390935 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257857768005 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482506116587 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244171745334 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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