Exposure to international media, such as films, TV and magazines, has an impact on the local culture. What do you think of these impacts?
Do you think that the advantages of these impacts outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advent of globalisation, exposure to worldwide news and media via TV or magazine has greatly inclined and this has a major impact on people. However, the nature of the impact may be positve or negative depending upon wide range of factors.
There are several upsides to this trend. To begin with, people are updated with the latest news from all over the world, which in a sense broadens their perspective and increase their knowledge base. Moreover, one gets to learn and understand about numerous things ranging from foreign culture and traditons to the latest technological advancements, as a result of which citizens from different parts of world began to relate with each other and eventually will bring the world closer. For instance, the movie avengers produced and directed by the western country was viewed by millions from different parts of the world. Seeing such a huge success, many local movie producers have started to venture and roll out movies based on such sci-fi genres. In a way, it has raised the standards of the entertainment.
Despite the advantages, there is a downside to it because in the process of exposing oneself to international media, the locals tend to forget about their own native culture. They start to adapt and follow the foreign traditions. The lifestyle of people vary greatly from region to region due to historical, climatic and economic factors. One of the simplest example is that, the western movies display the usage of alcohol largely, because they are based in colder regions and alcohol is a way to maintain their body temperatures, but if viewers from arid climates follow this trend then it can lead to serious health issues.
Lastly, on deeper dive, it appears that exposure to foreign media relatively brings a lot of useful things to the table and hence the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, then, for instance, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04823151125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64696439892 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604501607717 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.7534804557 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103141832562 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352983200846 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496901482034 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777380078407 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599902298597 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.