Extra curricular activities should be included in the teaching program at high school.
Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
Extracurricular activities play a vital role in the teaching program at high school. While others think that these activities take much time in teaching programs. However, I totally agree with the hook is that extracurricular activities should be held in learning. The reasons will be provided in two below paragraphs.
It is cannot be deniable that extracurricular activities would bring several benefits to students. First of all, the activities would provide for students more knowledge which tends to reality which has not been mentioned in coursebooks. These activities often are held out of normal class, especially outdoor space so it avoids the boring in teaching. Moreover, extracurricular activities are opportunities for learners to apply their knowledge in practice. for instance, English extracurricular activity is a good chance to practice listening and speaking effectively for students besides on class time.
Also, it is clear that holding extracurricular is a good way to create an environment where students can interact with each other and with the teacher. That thing would distribute much-improving rapport in class better even eliminating misunderstand among people. Furthermore, Students would be improved their soft skills by attending extracurricular activities. As a result, the activities of extracurricular usually demand group work spirits highly so that learners can practice work together and learn how to get along to with each other to finish mission.
In short, extracurricular activities take a part of the time of the learning process but have immense upsides. Thus, these activities deserve to get more courage in high school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in the teaching program at high school. While others think that these activities take...
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Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
...tioned in coursebooks. These activities often are held out of normal class, especially ou...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...s to apply their knowledge in practice. for instance, English extracurricular activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in short, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62055335968 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28963952348 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1356735463 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162009594099 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607463768443 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484707046533 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107439261222 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581571060745 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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