Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is said that the more extreme a sport is, the more interesting it becomes. However, some argue to the point that such sport should be forbidden for safety reasons. Despite that, there are some reasons why I believe such sport should not be banned.

First, every sports have their own safety rules. Even the sports where the athletes are less likely to be injured try to prevent any possible injuries. For instance, badminton athletes are trained to prevent their ankles twisted. When we are talking about more dangerous sports like skiing, the safety regulation becomes stricter. The race always requires well understanding of the safeties from the athletes for dangerous performances. Furthermore, there are always security teams who are ready to perform certain actions when something goes wrong.

Finally, there will be more negative impacts than positive ones for banning extreme sports. Fatal accident of such sports are rare, however, there will be obvious social and economic consequences. For instance, there is an athlete who has devoted his/her life for such sport, and realize he/she cannot perform it anymore, we can imagine how he/she will feel for it. There are many kinds of extreme sports such as racing, skiing, skydiving, wrestling, etc, and banning those will create a massive unemployment. Moreover, since such sports create big revenues from advertisements, there will be a subsequent economic plummet.

In conclusion, banning extreme sports will create negative social and negative economic impacts, also such action is nonsense in term of security reasons.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.368 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55843702287 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.266960351 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192990490539 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756343666237 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052104739995 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128765105327 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606352606556 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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