Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
People, especially young adults enjoy spending their free time doing sport. But sometimes people choose extreme activities which can be dangerous and harmful to them. That is why many people think that such kinds of sport as sky diving and skiing should be banned. Personally, I asolutely disagree with this idea because extreme sports have many advantages.
First of all, such activities as diving, skiing and surfing are widespread only in some regions of the world. So, trying those will be interesting for tourists. For instance, diving on Maldives will show a beautiful world of sea creatures there and you will not be able to see this somewhere else. The second reason is that extreme sports are not dangerous if person uses professional equipment and know how to do this sport, he will not be hurt. Any kind of sport can become dangerous if one is not organized and does nor treat seriously. In addition, doing extreme sport is a good way to calm down, relax after a stressful work and gain new skills.
As I have already mentioned before, I think that the idea of banning extreme activities is totaly wrong. Firstly, it gives a new experience, unforgetable memories, strong body and good health. Secondly, there are many people who are professional athlets, so they will lose their work if extreme sports are banned.
To sum up, I do believe that extreme sports should not be banned because it can help people to observe new places, relax, feel free and confident.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 226, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...eople think that such kinds of sport as sky diving and skiing should be banned. Personally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in addition, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51739976708 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599206349206 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2134098725 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35619405433 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11336370285 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747412633398 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210119528852 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944325712852 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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