Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays, extreme sports are believed to be more interesting than any other type of sports. Some people think that several forms of physical activities such as skydiving and skiing are really hazardous and have to be forbidden. In my opinion, I disagree with this aforementioned statement. However, I believe that there should be strict regulations for full protection and safety.
Although risky sports may be dangerous for some individuals, every physical recreation has its own regulation, procedures, and safety measures that everyone must comply with it. For example, people cannot start playing such extreme sports unless they take long houres training courses with experienced and professional trainers. Therefore, people only entitle to play these risky physical exercises when they have already met all criteria. These preparations guarantee that human beings can enjoy grave sports without any danger in their life.
Moreover, just because of few unfortunate incidents banning extreme sports is not a wise idea since every person has different hobbies. Some people like the feeling of adventure or want to challenge their capacity limit in order to enjoy the adrenaline rush. For instance, Skiing and parachuting are considered exciting experiences that a person can take part in. Consequently, it is their right to decide what they want to do in their leisure time, and no one can force them to change their avocations. Besides, the improving equipment and technology in modern days ensure your safety at the highest level. Instead of debating whether or not to prohibit the so-called extreme sports, the focus should be diverted to bringing in changes that could increase the overall safety in which is currently played.
In conclusion, no sport is entirely safe. Each has its pros and cons. Nevertheless, rigid rules should be taken. Otherwise, the process of banning the games such as sky diving is totally absurd.
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- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period Summarise 73
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... the highest level. Instead of debating whether or not to prohibit the so-called extreme sport...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: skydiving
...he process of banning the games such as sky diving is totally absurd.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35409836066 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72558226991 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652459016393 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7312965259 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7222222222 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278482894233 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074178565941 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513241100169 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163928404402 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417352481579 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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