Nowadays, being should not need to contribute to pay taxes for public schools of parents of children who study at private schools has been receiving a great deal of community attention. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.
First, paying taxes is one of the important duties of all citizens in every nation. To be honest, many people who pay amount of tax for public services may use it a little time in their life. For example, although seldom do some residents use services like call the police or fire brigade, but they keep contribute certain money from their personal income for this because of development and secure of their social. Second, if families of private school students do not provide money for the state education through taxes, others having children in public schools will pay more big taxes. This mean, it is unfair that rich people pay lower taxes than poor people.
In my view, because education is the most significant career in every country, all of inhabitants should share money to improve this system for a better future. Frankly, there are a lot of benefit when pay taxes for states education. For example, many good quality teacher who come from lots of country in the world will train students as well as possible, this will result they can be able to become high academic level people as well as high level labor force helping their nations and even the world more and more development. Moreover, by help prove taxes, many children can have an opportunity to go to school which nature and develop children’s abilities. Of course, parents having children who learn at private schools also see that advantages.
In addition, I think that support taxes for states school is a necessary thing, and what people need to do is paying taxes for states education school, including parents who sending their children to private school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, of course, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92429022082 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42149269349 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570977917981 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2367930688 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387393280844 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142038805023 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881367550467 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277651812885 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746985130816 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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