Families who send their children to private schools should not be required
to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that parents of children who send private schools should not pay to taxes. Personally, I agree with this view fairly.
There are a few reasons here. It may be wrong that paying taxes for private education .Firstly, economical stratification which is for both too teachers and students appear in a government. Emphasis for private teaching incredibly, that it would be to get down the prestige of the state education. Then the ken of students of the state schools will not develop. After that, the skilled teachers will want to work in private schools. Because the educators of the private schools take plenty of money than public schools, then many masters are interested to be acquire lots of earnings. As a result of moving skilled teachers from the state schools to private schools that effective education to children which are learning in public schools is taught by inexperienced teachers.
Secondly, many of families are not prosperous in the world. Children of such parents cannot give much money for private education as well as rich. So parents usually would like to study in the state schools. If the staffs of the state make such opportunities do not any taxes to learn for children, they will manage to have great results. In my opinion, if students want to progress their own minds and skills, teachers will be able to instruct for all students. So that, all educators can earn fairly and children have some knowledge. After that, these can be great achievement to the society.
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- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94509803922 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59745831464 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6330524948 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8125 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304907501023 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920053388298 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062154608965 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226609183544 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650785350775 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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