Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Don’t give me the fish teach me how to fish this is the importance of education and many families who sends their children to a nongovernmental school have argued around funding the education system of the state .this essay will discuss whether paying taxes for the educational system is needed for the common good or not
Many families are sending their students to nongovernmental institutions that they pay a huge fees to the private school so they ‘re spending their own money and they’re not getting a benefit from the money sent to the state education system .actually this is somehow purposed because if there’s no benefit from the money they’re paying so why are they giving it away .for instance the families have used to sending their children to the private schools are not willing to send them to public college
The idea of not giving money because there is no guarantee is actually preposterous ,because paying the fee paid schools fees that your children are getting the benefit out of it doesn’t let you not responsible for supporting your community and government . because the money paid for the government will be affecting the quality of educating the less rich students, for example the money that is needed to support the education of many other children who needs the money which will have been affecting the poor student life and make it better .
Overall the parents sending their child to private educational institutions discussed around is it better to financially support the state Educating system or it’s not that important . actually, supporting the others will beautifully affect your life positively and will make it filled with helping the others which will help you feel better about yourself and your family .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0618556701 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61644853383 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477663230241 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 383.025048137 49.4020404114 775% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 368.25 106.682146367 345% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312817372645 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175228576362 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965696237031 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202263485828 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574945766613 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.8 13.0946893788 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.