Some people argue that parents who have their children studying at private schools should not have the responsibility of paying taxes for state schools. Personally, I totally disagree with this point of view.
It is a problem for the government to reduce tax paying for those who have access to private schools. As far as I'm concerned, there is a difficult stage for the government to calculate taxes for some households. This would lead to the complexity for the public money and may appear mistakes for both the public and the state. Another point is that there would be more conflicts between the poor and the wealthy. Rich families are likely to send their children to private schools, which would make the poor pay higher taxes than the rich if tax discounts were applied in the future.
From my perspective, I suppose that paying taxes to support education systems is a public responsibility. It would be a positive impact to society if everyone is willing to pay taxes in order to support the state schools, which would be a good opportunity for every child to have an equal chance to study. The more students could access education, the more benefits that country would gain from it. The future generation might be a big employment force to increase the economy, which could improve our quality of life.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above,I would argue that a reduction in taxes for families that have sent their children to private schools is not a good solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8288973384 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55571525033 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528517110266 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3554763702 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282374159463 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10157092459 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734319721489 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159983483959 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793251868793 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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