Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business Other feel they are an opportunity for business Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is true that the new regulations to solve the climate change issue is a topic of much debate for many many businesses. While there are some drawbacks to these reforms, I maintain the opinion that it would bring a wide range of benefits for industries.
On the one hand, the idea of how adversely the climate change reforms produce is attractive for several reasons. The first reason for this is business may see a surge in their operational and investment costs to comply with new. This is mainly because changing and adapting in a short time is a daunting task, everything is in a stable and orderly way therefore changing to follow the reforms would have a huge impact on their business. Another reason is laws to accelerate the transition toward a low-carbon economy can cause ripple effects on the economy. This would be explained by the fact that businesses struggle with pounding; therefore, they could not afford timely new ones and there is an increasing level of high bank debts.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe climate change reforms are regarded as opportunities for business. The main one íss many eco-friendly companies can gain benefits from their investment in green technologies or products. This is due to more and more people being prone to protect the environment and they would opt for friendly items in their life. The second reason for this is a chance to reshape and renovate the models and operation for those having carbon- intensive rate. Moreover, businesses would find an appropriate way to solve these reforms and enhance their products, staff, equipment and so on.
In conclusion, although climate change reforms present certain díadvantages, I contend that it should be encouraged due to the improvement in friendly products and operation as well. It can be predicted that many businesses would embrace these reforms and male changes in the near future.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97523219814 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71162895533 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1446077906 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.785714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228870888392 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830797322976 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504926017941 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143392356365 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016891461799 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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