Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out although people have been aware of this problem for a long time Why do people do so little about it give suggestions on how to solve this problem

It is irrefutable that people are undergoing degradation of many evils. Plants and animals are indispensable for our environment, but our society does not care about it. I will highlight the reasons that why people are becoming irresponsible to help the fragile living things and also give suggestions to eradicate it in the looming paragraphs.
Nowadays people have a hectic schedule they are running madly in a rat race of material comforts and working hard to achieve it. Moreover, the increasing population is also responsible for the elimination of flora and fauna. Space is a major factor to erect the house, due to which deforestation is surging. Apart from this, human beings are apathetic, they can do anything to take the benefits of other species. To cite an example, a million billion animals are used for research and medical purposes. Therefore, these all are the factors that influence the quantity of flora and fauna in this world.
Furthermore, the government should create awareness among people regarding the advantages of livestock under the auspices of media. They should also allocate more fund in the research field to make the clone endangered species. Despite that, it is the onus of official authorities to impose heavy taxes on non-vegetarian food. Youngsters should knowledge about the importance of creatures.
I would like to reiterate that it is the responsibility of every individual to save animals and plants. Government should take strict maxim to protect them.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esearch and medical purposes. Therefore, these all are the factors that influence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22406639004 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93811681722 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634854771784 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6558118984 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0666666667 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171189050086 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447056127106 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359130044016 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846686876383 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541975533162 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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