It is irrefutably true that developing countries is depend on the agriculture due to the lack new technology. majority of business and trades are dependent on it directly or indirectly ; however, youngsters have become uninterested in this filed and want to adopt other career such as doctor, teacher and many more which offer prohibitively high pay. This essay intends to explain causes behind this trend and also offer some solution in order to mitigate this trouble.
There are numerous reasons behind this trend, first and foremost logical cause is that farming work is required tremendous physical work and excessive amount of labor which new generation want to less demanding physical work because they hold professional degrees as well as addictive of sedentary life style. As a consequence, they do not want manual work. Moreover, in the case of farming, people have to work in all unfavorable weather conditions for example, in hot summer, in extremely cold winter and in rainy season, is not every body peace of cup. In addition, government not only reduce the subsidy on pesticides and insecticides but also enacted anti-farming laws,it new policies demoralize new youth to adopt agriculture as primary career option. To cite an example, DAP is a pesticides include subsidy it reduced considerably from 50% to 20% between 2011 and 2018. Last but not least, profits are declined on crops as compared to past and expense inclined significantly and discouraged to youth.
individuals and government both should take some concrete steps to overcome this issue, firstly, anti-farming laws should be modified in the contemporary era, and cutting-edge technology had better be incorporated in the agriculture in order to reduce manual and labor work . Besides this, If government escalate subsidy on agriculture products and pesticides, it would encourage to new generation to enter in agriculture work since it rises the profit from crops, which is very necessary for smooth living then agriculture field will become financially sound and attract to many people.
n conclusion, given aforementioned information it is abundantly clear that whether choosing farming career or not is individual choice but some measure should be taken by government to encourage youngsters owing to majority of developing nations dependent on this sector if this sector takes back seat, country would not progress by leaps and bounds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25130890052 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87684782221 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562827225131 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 382.0 20.2975951904 1882% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2006.0 106.682146367 1880% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 382.0 20.7667163134 1839% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 120.0 7.06120827912 1699% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185374020719 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185374020719 0.084324248473 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125351531464 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510067903268 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 194.3 13.0946893788 1484% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -324.71 50.2224549098 -647% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 153.5 11.3001002004 1358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.65 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.51 8.58950901804 309% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 154.8 10.1190380762 1530% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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