Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree?
The fashion trends change very frequently these days. From my point of view, while fashion trends give you new ideas and innovations in the world of fashion, I believe that we should not blindly follow the modern dressing style, rather we should dress in clothes that they are comfortable in.
On the positive side, there is no denying that fashion is one way that individuals can express their inner-self. Equipped with countless styles, colors, and materials, a fashion indicates one’s taste, social class, likes, and dislikes. Having an up to date fashion could help people to choose the right look that shows their respect to others and reflects their personality traits better because designers display individualism in their work so as to inspire people to be creative in finding their own styles.
Despite the enjoyment brought by fashions, people should beware of their ever-changing nature and the expense of time and money on this following trends. A style of clothing can be popular at a particular time but suddenly becomes obsolete within a short period of time. Therefore, being obsessed with following the current trend makes people haven’s got any savings. Secondly, I think it is more important to feel comfortable and confident in what you wear. When you are comfortable, you feel confident and you will be able to do what you want without worrying about how you look or how you should move.
In conclusion, people should buy clothes which are more wearable and in-line with their lifestyle. Fashion trends change in every season and it is consumptive to follow the latest style. If people wear clothes they are confident and comfortable in, they will automatically look good
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ers display individualism in their work so as to inspire people to be creative in findin...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...uddenly becomes obsolete within a short period of time. Therefore, being obsessed with followi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65210495914 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3967703782 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309945408897 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947980886191 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886080995297 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182956486292 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990742572606 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.