Fast food has become so popular worldwide that it is destroying the nutritional quality of food what do you think because of this the traditional food and cooking method is being forgotten.Do you agree or disagree with the statement give reasonns for your answer.
In the concurrent world, masses are working hard from dawn to dusk to have disposable income behind the blind run of aggressive materialization.In order to cope with their busy schedule they compromise with traditional food and prefer fast food despite its disadvantages.
In this fast moving world, individual are work hard from day to night for their betterment of the future.Also, now community are influencing from western culture and they prefer to junk food rather than conventional food .However, there are some rationale for fast food, First, in this globalisation world , both men and women have working hard for their career and they have disposable income . They are living in fast life and also have a busy schedule because of this reason they prefer to fast food despite of traditional food . Fast food is easy to cook and also, sales time available because now street corner available at every corner of the societies.Furthermore, they are using advanced technology for making wide varieties: vadapav , dabeli, puff, pakodi . They are doing attractive garnishing on it .Also, youngsters may be addicted by palatable taste.Thus, this is reasons about a fast food.
To continue with, why people not eat traditional because of main concern is time consuming and nowadays, people are working hard from morning till to the evening .So, they have hectic schedule and they do not have enoug time for traditional cooking. If you make conventional food so, he or she need art of cooking and women are working neck to neck to men because of this reason they prefer to eat junk food . In junk food ,their is no nutritional importance and also, leads to several diseases:Obesity,Blood pressure,Heart problem,Diabetes.
To reiterate,that the way world is moulding to western culture the consumption of fast food is ought to increase which cannot be curtailed only the women of the house need to be conscious on serving the traditional food at house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16352201258 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16225356102 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5953581347 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.444444444 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313693568558 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154728815125 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453213529419 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200032774361 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450253238293 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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