Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, music become consequential part of life. Though some folk believe that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and age together, others disagree to the given statement. I partially agree to the above statement because music alleviate the gulf between cultures and also create difference between people of different age group.
At the outset, musics' are created in myriad of languages with different rhythms. due to international musics' the gap between different cultures and ages has reduced. For instance, Despacito music, an international music, become famous in india. With the help of that music citizens of the country become more aware about the language in which it was created. They become familiar with that language. As we know that language is directly proportional to culture owing to which people accepted their culture.
Moreover, as the age increases the choice of a person also changes. younger human beings like hip-hop music and rock music whereas older human beings like classical music. However, their are some types of music which bring different age group together. For example, JANA GANA MANA, national anthem of india, brings every citizen together and also decrease the gap in different ages.
On the other hand, human beings are unable to identify their own culture due to widespread of different cultures and traditions, whilst the gap between age group also proliferated. To cite an example, due to variety of musics' younger people are moving toward latest music like remix of old music but older people still addicted to old music as emotions are attached with it. Henceforth, the gap annex in ages.
In conclusion, music is a good way of bringing different culture's people and age together paradoxically it also have some ripple consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2439862543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61987321579 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522336769759 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.9555223515 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376199947294 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133139506038 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114171444407 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258083674807 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928352059255 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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