Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.
Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this?
There are various different perspectives on the issue of fast food. Some people believe that this
kind of food has a positive role to play in the world because of its convenience and low cost;
however, I would argue that it is harmful both to the people who eat it and to society at large.
There are two main reasons for this
Firstly, it is a well-known fact that eating too much fast food is extremely unhealthy. Foods such
as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips contain a great deal of fat and salt, which cause major
health problems like high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease, although I certainly agree
that fast food is both cheap and convenient, the illnesses it causes when we get older are very
expensive and it is the taxpayer who often has to pay for this treatment
In addition to this, many fast food restaurants advertise to children in order to influence their
future eating habits. The McDonalds clown is a good example of this kind of advertising. Ronald
McDonald’s bright clothes and smile are clearly designed to attract the attention of children, who
then push their parents to take them to McDonalds. I believe the restaurant does this because it
feels that children who grow up eating in McDonalds also provides playgrounds and holds
children’s birthday parties to get busy parents through the door
In conclusion, I once again restate my view that fast food has a negative effect on our lives
because of the health programs it causes and the way that fast food chains try to change the
eating habits of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85185185185 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5456706302 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.427476487 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.142857143 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5714285714 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190707489671 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923910405532 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397824975363 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589492476625 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546282076318 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.0946893788 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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