Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office buildings. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In some cities around the world, citizens are free to choose style to build their house whiles in other cities, their counterpart must follow the control of authorities. From my point of views, the freedom to choose architecture style for buildings and houses have both positive and negatives effects on the society.
Regarding the enormous of advantages of this figure, the overall architecture of these cities will be diversity which means architects will be free and creative to design unique styles for structures for different purposes. For example, some coffee shops want to set up friendly nature shops with full of trees and flowers for people to relax, while others shop want to have high technologies style to be appealing technology believers. As can see, these shops only focus on sell coffee, but they can have different design to serve for different type customers. Another example for the diversity purpose of architect design is to build people own houses, some people will refer to simple design so they can have many options to buy cheap furniture, while others will prefer unique design with luxury furniture and ignore price. As a result of these purposes, the architecture of these cities will be diversity, it also reflects the variety of culture in these cities so these values will be charming tourism all around the world.
Inspire of the significant value of variety constructions can bring, there are some negative influences we need to take into consideration such as lacking control from authorizes can decrease safety. For example, some building owners want to save money and they reduce investment for safe such as avoid investing to fire fight system and as a result of fatal accident in the future. In addition, poor design can create many ugly architectures or create slum dog areas.
All in all, freedom to determine to the architectural design can be double-edged sword. It can create unique and charming architecture for cities, citizens can violate the legal by cutting their cost and time in their projects.
- Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office buildings People think that they are free to choose the design they like Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages 67
- Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office buildings People think that they are free to choose the design they like Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages 73
- Some cities have few controls over design and construction on housing and office buildings People think that they are free to choose the design they like Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages 79
- With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The line graph below shows the growth of households with personal computers in the US Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the changes 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09495548961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63764338113 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.6835416003 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.083333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205471378221 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808727670686 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553338412457 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119543259428 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573779029467 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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