Fast food restaurant are becoming more popular then ever all over the world .what are the possible causes and effects of this phenomen.
Fast food restaurants are getting more famous all over the world as compared to the past.people like to visit different restaurant with friends and relish various Continental attractive food items.
The first main reason is wholesome food gives more taste and spice to consumers.secondly due to contemporary trend of both parents working people have no time to search for food.masses usually prefer to buy it through online order.And the last significant cause is consuming outside junk food cheaper and easier to get.
But eating more junk food and not having balanced diet make people lazy and unhealthy.people are getting affected through numerous aliments like obesity, diabetes,heart attack and overweight.Along with effecting to human health it also harmful to our traditional values .under this contemporary era fast food eliminate the value of home made food.
To conclude ,I would like to say that we should not give too much preference to restaurant foods ,needs to be limitise it.Give more approach to eat healthy food which give as energy ,support to work properly and remain healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35632183908 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99197411468 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2153518032 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.0 106.682146367 218% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 20.7667163134 209% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239581992744 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14800437671 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703123414942 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14800437671 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703123414942 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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