Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your answer with examples and relevant evidence.
Everybody knows that motherhood has been always very difficult throughout history. Mothers has obligation about taking care their children such as breast-feeding, cloth replacement and also, they responsible their homes’ needs such as cleaning and cooking. If we look at all the heavy responsibilities, we should think that a person help to mother. This person is father. It is right that motherhood is valuable because they carry their babies their belly for 9 months before birth and also, fatherhood is precious as well as much as motherhood because fathers have some responsibilities such as helping mother for taking care and be good role model their child for their life.
To start with, father should support and help to mother not only birth period but also growth process because these processes are very hard. For example, in first periods after the birth, generally mothers try to take care their baby despite their babies’ crying loudly along day.This status damage to mother’s body and mental health. Because of this, when fathers come to their home in the evening, they should take a little mothers’ responsibilities for taking care. Thus, mothers’ psychologies, minds and bodies find the chance for refreshment.
In addition to taking care, does enough to help to taking care baby for father ? Of course does not enough. Fathers should be good role model their childs along life. This is very important as much as taking care children. Because, they should think how do their childs should behave in the community and how to be good person. And also, they should pay attention their behaviour in society when they are together with childs. As a result, they become the person who is leader about having good personality in society for their children.
Finally, when we look all the fathers’ responsibilities, we should understand importance of fatherhood and also, we should say that fatherhood should be emphasized. Hopefully, people will notice that parenthood is not only about motherhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ir babies' crying loudly along day.This status damage to mother's body and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26380368098 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87385310932 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2812413091 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179104803254 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609666722184 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524669491814 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142841422 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441804699058 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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