Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are
solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they
are also responsible for bringing the children up
Father and mother both have an equal and vital role to play in a child’s birth and upbringing. Even in the current times most of the societies across several countries still consider mother more important parent over the father. Motherhood is widely spoken and considered while making decision around children. Whether the decision to have child or custody of child or adoption mother are given an upper edge over the fathers.
Specifically when there is decision about bringing a child into the world, it’s majorly where only women are asked if they wish to have child or bear the child. This often puts women under physical, social and mental pressure. It comes across to them that they will be only one who has to raise the child solely and primarily. Whether it is looking after the health of child, dropping them to school , looking after their studies, extra-curricular all of these prime responsibilities will be on their shoulder. This to a certain extent, this is reality of many societies.
Many women are asked to drop their careers or themselves stop pursuing their aspirations in life due to responsibility of raising child. Fathers on the other hand have relatively lower societal expectations compared to mothers. However, this seems and highly imbalanced culture. Fatherhood should be also be brought into notice.
It is essential that fathers are equally asked whether they wish to have child, are they emotionally, mentally ready for the responsibilities beyond the financial aspect ? How will they accommodate their career along with responsibility of fatherhood?
Fatherhood equally needs to be emphasized as much as motherhood as it gives father a sense of importance in the child’s life. It brings them the awareness and close look to duties they require to perform as a parent, efforts and patience it takes to raise child and have equal time and presence in their child's life. Moreover, it helps them become empathetic towards other and look at things differently, learn to maintain balance and take equal forefront in raising the child.
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- Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...health of child, dropping them to school , looking after their studies, extra-curr...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'lowed', 'lowered'.
Suggestion: lowed; lowered
...thers on the other hand have relatively lower societal expectations compared to mothe...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'performing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: performing
...s and close look to duties they require to perform as a parent, efforts and patience it ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76868299672 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9048376508 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195439706464 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064963076212 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548746100154 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123284860425 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619675671062 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.