Figures show that some countries have an increasing proportion of the population who are aged 60 or older. What do you think the effects of this may be.
Society is changing inchmeal and progressing constantly as the expansion of technological revolutions, which means the rate of young labourer plays a prominent role in many countries . Therefore, the growth in proportion of the population who are aged 60 or older may cause many effects .
First of all , looking at the narrow-aspects . The more residents who are old, the more lack of creativity and explosion . In business , there is less potential project attracting many investments may affect directly to economy of enterprise .In many fields, the shortage of young human resouces leads to the freshness of idea , which is the necessity in contemporary life.For instance : the development of a company depends on how they bring effective ways on solving problems to community , which are unique from others , the young are able to do this better than elder because of their enthunsiasm .
In the wide-sight , the rise of population aging idicates the increasing of mortality rate and the lack of labourer. Therefore , the obvious growth of unemployed rate is the big trouble for their government, which can interupt the progress in many developing countries,especially in economical field . Moreover , robots and artificial intelligence are increasing for catering humankind ‘s life , the population aging in some countries make their resident’s life not to catch up with the change of the world.
In many ways , the increasing of proportion of the population who are aged 60 or older may single out many negative effects.Therefore , government might have solution for this problem as soon as possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37450199203 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24573851066 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.080322912 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.888888889 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250642519316 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108579239231 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115469663492 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168161021346 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777904892236 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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