Film and computer games contain very popular now. some people think that they have a negative effect on our society should be banned. other people say they are harmless relaxation discuss both views give your opinion.
Entertainment plays a significant role in our society. Amusement media such as Television and virtual space is having violence content, which is harmful to society, especially on the youngsters. Therefore, the main question is that kind of stuff should be banned or not? There are some pores and cons, which I shall be discussed in the further essay.
Focusing on the darkest side, the most visible risk is children would be more violence after watching the negative content in movies or browsing through the internet .since the broadcaster, who updates the media they do not care about the adverse effect on people they just want to increase their subscribers, expand their TRP, and flourished their business, which immensely effects on the innocent mindset. consequently, they will become more violent in the counterpart of the society, and do violence act like a criminal such as robbery, murder, selling liquor, taking drugs, and smoking e.t.c.
Contrary to this, there are some advantages which can not be overlooked. Firstly, Nowadays, the majority of people have been working at 24×7and their stressful life affected to work life that's why they need some blissfulness. In order to this, they can enjoy the recreational show via those media, and also it helps to boost their stress.
Apart from this, the stuff is not only helpful for entertainment but also useful for educational purposes: awareness programs, learning medium, documentaries, discoveries, and many more, which is immensely useful for everyone. For instance, the Discovery channel, which provides great information about wildlife or ancestors lifestyle.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that although there is numerous disadvantage, I strongly believe advantage is more overweight than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44483985765 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88986378111 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64768683274 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1831097324 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.090909091 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155284960323 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054409184547 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041874240474 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741971836439 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530611879243 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.