Films and computer games which contain violence are popular. Some people believe tht they have a negative impact on society and so should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
In due course, have already films and computer games become so attractive and they created a constant debate. some people are of the opinion that movies and video games which involve crime and violence should be prohibited as they carry adverse effects on the society. I am in a partial agreement with this assertion and each argument will be discussed in this essay below before reaching a solid conclusion. To commence with, action movies and e-games are so common among teenagers as time-killers in their spare time. Thus, most citizens advocate to be against those kinds of films as the following reasons proved. First of all, violence may build up childeren's negative behaviour such as using curses, shouting at their parents when they are angry which brings about a conflict among family members. Second of all, adults have a tendency to think the real world as a virtual, so they will do anything they want with ease, although some of them are illegal that leads to juvenile delinquency which hampers their bright future . From another angle, merits of films and computer games should not be overlooked. As, while civils are watching those kinds of movies, they are able to learn problem-solving skills in order to avoid a dire situation. Moreover, they may act as actors to pick the actions of them up which are crucial for their later life that is full of challenges as well as struggles in order to defend themselves. In conclusion, violent films and digital games have their own both advantages and demerits.Thus, I partially agree with this notion due to aforementioned reasons. I believe that if they strike a balance between violence and their merits and take each side into a consideration, sides of disadvantages will carry much less adverse effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96308724832 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66096759422 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604026845638 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6995703415 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296111431993 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104762744276 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709511014048 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296111431993 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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