Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers.
Do the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantages?
The great technological development that we witness nowadays enable us to download different films and games quite easily through mobile devices such as smartphones, tablets and laptop computers. this can have many advantages although I believe that they are completely overcome by dangerous disadvantages.
With respect to the benefits, being able to access any movie or video game is far amusing for any person. In fact, by clicking few buttons on can get his favorite film right on the screen which can replace paying lots of money going to cinemas or buying CDs. In addition, this technology has brought enormous improvements in electronic games industry and programming which became a huge business nowadays. For example, the new online game named “Pubg” actually turned its owner a millionaire in no time. so, one can say it is a whole new world with magnificent new chances in many fields.
As far as drawbacks are concerned, seriously hazardous outcomes can specially affect both children and youngsters. this is because these devices became integrated in our lives and parents can not control what their kids watch or play. Even if parents were able to supervise these online substances, this turn young people frustrate so they can escape from home and do whatever they want outdoors with their friends. For instance, a famous game called The Blue Whale was produced by hackers few months ago that was revealed to push young aged players to commit crimes and has ended up in several suicidal crimes all over the world. Hence, parents should take close care to their kids to inhibit any catastrophes out of that online-based lives.
To conclude, in my opinion, accessible internet products may have fabulous advantages yet can cause terrible effects. The disadvantage have completely outweighed the advantages in that technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24832214765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80741552157 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684563758389 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7960018928 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292467486848 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863423429976 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739052038107 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165760269302 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742551287214 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.