In certain areas of the world youth encouragingly look for a job after they finish secondary school and before having high education, either in their home country or abroad. Although this idea presents the advantage of strengthening life experience, it may also carry some dangerous turns that may affect their life later.
with respect to the benefits, real work environment would be more effective than many years of studying. It helps the man to understand how things happen in the real world which mostly differs from theoretical learning. In addition, travelling abroad adds to young people life many experiences that enable them to find their hidden talents and different abilities. For example, most great people biographies stated important life changes that came out of acknowledgement of different cultures and traditions. So this step would really be mandatory for youngsters.
As far as bad outcomes are concerned, pushing the in-experienced adults into life can result in serious problems especially travelling abroad. Basically, they would meet bad friends who are usually attractive and be pulled into a dangerous society. Recent researches from Harvard university revealed that many adults have experienced drug addiction for the first time in their life in that period between high school and university. Hence, people must pay greater attention to their sons and daughters at this age and try hard to bring balance between their sense of freedom and self security and responsibilities.
To conclude, getting young people involved into actual life experiences should be encouraged cautiously and under supervision.
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers.Do the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?! 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, may, really, second, so, then, for example, in addition, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5119047619 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89408165344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5734763865 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245261392929 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750341630585 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488208734126 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133043722942 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308421194906 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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