The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads.
Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The number of the cars on the roads is on the increase, which includes serious repercussions for the environment and population. In my opinion, other forms of transport should be introduced and the ownership and usage of vehicles should be limited by international laws.
The problem caused by the growing number of automobiles might be alleviated by developing alternative forms of transport such as trains and buses. Compared to cars, they are environmentally more friendly owing to the little amount of emission that they produce, which contribute to the greenhouse gasses. Moreover, public transportation is equipped with fast and safe services, thereby reducing the the traffic accident rates ant the amount of time spent on commuting. Hence, improving public transport amenities might lead to a drop int eh number of vehicles on the roads.
There are numerous ways that the authorities could gain control over the acquisition of cars if they impose several international policies. this way people are more liable to follow the rules and the results would be immediate. For instance, rising vehicle ownership fees could act as a deterrent to people, who strive to possess more than one car. As a consequence, this would foster to use public transportation more often decreasing the traffic density in rush hours, which is one of the main issues that people living in urban areas. Thus, by formulating taxes, the government should obtain the ability to attain a regulation over automobile ownership.
In conclusion, it was demonstrated that the implications of the increasing rate of using cars on the roads may be relieved with the advancement of public transport facilities and with stricter laws on car acquisition and usage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34532374101 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00130227243 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2188563535 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28329388836 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948149918368 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810834191732 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18434408419 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760178585889 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.