Annually, the car industry is gaining ground and making everybody grow an avid interest in possessing a car. I am totally agreed on managing this gradually soaring appetite via introducing new restrictive laws or improving transportation system.
First and foremost, since the colossal number of cars driven on the streets is rising, people are going to struggle with a lot of traffic jams on the roads which are not controllable. This dilemma causes our cities to be more hectic and bustling places to live. Subsequently, more and more people will be challenging anxiety, fatigue and depression. Besides, more parking spaces need to be built which can occupy huge spaces of the city and spoils the cityscape.
Last but not least, we should not overlook the environmental issues emerging through mismanagement of car ownership and use. Firstly, air pollution drastically emerged by emitted carbon dioxide from cars exhausts will be a threat to people’s health. Fresh and clean air will be scarce in the future. Secondly, noise pollution generated by cars can have harmful impacts on humans and wildlife health. Sleep disturbances and high stress levels are correlated with sound pollution. Not only will pollution threaten our lives but also rising fuel consumption will lead to lack of energy sources.
To put in a nutshell, it is better to consider increasing number of vehicles on the roads apart from its hype. I once again reaffirm my position that enacting new laws as well as implementing more efficient public transport system must be carried out to control this trend.
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- In most countries disabled people are not catered for adequately, e.g. buildings are often inappropriately designed. Governments rely too heavily on charities and voluntary organizations to provide assistance and funding. What further measures could be ta 78
- Recent research shows that the consumption of junk food is a major factor in poor diet and this is detrimental to health. Some people believe that better health education is the answer to this problem but others disagree. What is your opinion? 73
- Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living. Discuss. 84
- Damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of worldwide improvements in the standard of living. Discuss. 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20233463035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82455969018 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677042801556 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5023605626 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208362639703 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634717208503 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352915491148 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114306021726 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00611327527634 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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