First impressions are important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing a good job.
To what extent do you agree?
First impression is the last impression. I do believe that, this saying should be justified. It is considered by some that, to secure an ideal job , people need to be performed well at the time of interviews. This eassy will agree that, the best performance, attitudes and prompt response definitely give a positive result during interviews.
First and foremost thing is that, the first impression is always important in corporate sectors to get a job. In other words, keeping a good eye contacts with interviewer and a smiley face is essential to make a good impression during interviews. Jobs like receptionist needs a smile on their face always to handle with different personalities with confidence. Therefore, almost all the organizations hire their staff on the basis of the first impression.
In addition to that, it is the best time to express our ideas and thoughts in front of the interview board to show our positive attitudes. A strong attitude is always welcomed to own positions in any organizations. That is why the international exams like Occupational English Test ask the applicants to do the scenarios based on their work experience to assess their attitudes towards many situations. Hence, this first impression during interview is always help to make a decision on to appoint a staff.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, along with the high level of education , people need to keep up good smile , voice clarity and a good attitude in interviews. Because, the first impression is not only the last impression but also it is the best always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03787878788 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96253024423 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7561814518 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225997894704 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078615707835 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494171762286 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136075658449 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337365450829 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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