The flowchart illustrates the production of coloured plastic paper clips in a small factory.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the production process.
The flowchart illustrates the process of how to produce colored paper clips in a small factory. Overall, there are five steps involved in the process, beginning with selecting the material molten plastic and ending with sending the product of clips out from the factory by packing and despatch.
To begin, molten plastic is poured into moulds distinguished three different colors; which are red, blue and yellow. Moving to the second step, these clips are then checked for strength in a quality control system. Also, at this step, the machine will reject unsatisfactory clips. In the third step, workers in the factory sort all these clips manually by hand, putting mixed coloured clips in a group and single coloured clips into another group. After the third step is completed, two types of coloured clips will be checked again in a quality control system to make sure that they are put into groups correctly. Finally, the process ends by packing and delivery to markets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02469135802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39855923832 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 176.041082164 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4209869151 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241390534822 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102223486696 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103294773383 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214081821955 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947500583836 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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