Food products’ labels should contain detailed information about that food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What might be the most important information for food labels.
Since the desire for acknowledging explicitly what is being put in the stomach leaped, the ignorance of the printed food’s descriptions has virtually disappeared. Lately, this has left every food’ companies concerned about whether to make connections with their consumers through the fully mentioned labels or not. Personally, I advocate this opinion in terms of the morality and ethical values transferred through the products.
First and foremost, a food label is a determined answer for the question of the buyers’ future in regard to the honesty in the printed pieces of paper. In the past few years, when it came to the fast-food industry, many lawsuits had been brought to the big companies due to the understatement or the exaggeration of the chemicals contained in the products. Cardiovascular-deteriorating factors like fats or illegal preservatives found in the products left the long-year consumers’ wellness unanswerably chronic medical problems. Therefore, regarding morality and society-based characteristic, needless to mention, a fully explicitly mentioned description is the most pivotal factor when bringing the products to the market.
Moreover, creating a careful label also fosters the company’s monetization in the long run. When it comes to regular buyers, this reinforces the reliability and trust among them. For example, the undecided sensation of the buyers might be weakened when they approach a better well-described description of their familiar products. Even more, this also creates for brands a new source of their revenue which is the so-called new and potential buyers who give their economic income a fertile land to stably cultivate and reap huge income.
However, to make this such label, personally, I perceive that the producers better off focusing more on the accentuation of the colors on the top necessary factors like the nutritional contained factors or the ingredients instead of the brands or slogans.
In conclusion, for many people, without being aware of the products earlier, the printed label is the very thing coming to their mind, hence, companies should really mention a fully detailed description in the supplies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52537313433 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25885397106 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585074626866 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7421575703 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.384615385 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248339571093 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803165469683 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535050597267 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129965386515 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635768439053 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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