Foreign tourists should be charged more than local people when visiting cultural and historical attractions in that country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the tourism industry has become an essential source of national income. Some argue that the expenditure of foreign visitors should be higher than the locals in terms of sightseeing both cultural and historical places. In my opinion, I believe that each and every tourist should be charged equally.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people think that foreigners should pay more money than the dwellers when visiting another nation. Since a majority of visitors come from developed countries such as The United States, Great Britain and France, their incomes should always be expectedly far greater than the residents in destination sites. Therefore, most locals would agree with the higher charge of foreign visitors compared to the locals. Furthermore, extracting from other countries’ citizens definitely contributes to the host nation’s revenue rather than taking money from the local residents.
However, despite the fact that western tourists may earn bigger salaries than individuals in other continents which have more cultural and historical attractions, the fee of visiting these locations still need to be equal among visitors. The difference in money charging could raise a disagreement from international tourists leading to reducing the number of annual visitors. For example, Vietnam’s income from tourism in 2015 reportedly dropped from 240 billion Vietnam Dongs to 170 billion due to the dissatisfaction of international visitors about being charged higher than the locals at every public visiting location.
In conclusion, I believe that all tourists should be charged the same fee when visiting cultural and historical attractions regardless of where they come from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61977186312 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93290249476 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8344569986 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358221749436 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137417075267 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863400953158 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23279805163 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392042306662 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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