Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries which cause harms to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?
People have different views about whether it is better to utilize fossil fuels' energy for human consumption or renewable resources such as wind, solar or water. While there are some detrimental impacts in the use of wind or solar power, I would argue that using finite sources instead of fossil fuels brings more benefits to human lives
On the one hand, the use of solar or wind energy is more likely to have various cons to some extent. Firstly, visible strong energy like sunlight or a lake may have some extra effects which might severely influence the human race. Since those energies start from the prime resources of the universe, it is more inclined to form some alternate negative substances to our health, or even more, it will overwhelm our electrical devices. For instance, some houses in some countries were on fire due to the overwhelming technologies run by solar panels. Secondly, it is relatively unaffordable for some developed or poor countries to own the number of technical machines to transfer the power into useful sources for our human consumption. As a result, they hardly catch up with developing and affluent countries and be obsolete.
On the other hand, I would claim that it is highly dominant to use more energy from the Sun or tidewater. Firstly, reducing the amount of oil, gas, and coal and encouragingly using the power from solar or tide energy might cut down on the running-out of those non-renewable resources. According to statistics, the recent UK's environment record is getting decreased due to policies for operating solar energy for human necessity. Furthermore, wind and solar power are more likely to be the most powerful infinite resources to keep providing energy for the necessity of human lives. If we don't take the action for that issue, the fossil resources will be used up soon.
In conclusion, while using renewable resources such as solar or wind energy is not a preferred option to some countries, I would believe that it would be the best method to save up the reserves from fossil fuels
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 588, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...for the necessity of human lives. If we dont take the action for that issue, the fos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92774566474 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64436336819 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526011560694 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5802851888 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6153846154 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293973062463 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110645196298 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564888909341 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1973220827 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323452144771 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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