Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries which cause harms to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is not denying that, our environment is getting affected day by day with varied causes, while among them was maximum use of coal, oil and natural gas. However, with the time scientists has developed different eco friendly energy, as a alternative sources to fossil fuel, like, wind and solar power. I am completely agreed in this statement as a positive development and this essay will support my point of view.
To begin with, our earth is full of natural oil, gas and minerals, but with the extreme use of this natural energy our environment can be polluted, while, all these natural energy are limited and at one point it can be empty. For intense, Arabian country are rich in oil, likewise, Australian are blessed with huge source of coal , all these country are making natural energy as the main source of strength for income and to develop their country. Hence, in this competition they are exporting these natural sources in maximum level. As a result, Industries are using coal and polluting the environment with different harmful gas like carbon dioxide, oil can polluted the sea and different spices over there. Likewise, gas are polluting air around us, while, on other side, the stock of natural minerals are minimizing.
On other hand, the development of alternative energy are the important to protect the natural minerals and many countries had already started using these to protect the environment. Such as, using electric car, help to save petrol and diesel and save the pollution of air, solar system , wind power are the best invention as alternative to these. But the user of this alternative power are in low ration, each country should contribute some investment and encourage people to use these type of alternative energy to save the environment , as well as, save the stock of natural minerals for future generation.
In conclusion, encouraging people to use the alternative source of energy is the positive development in every aspect and every country must contribute on using alternative sources to save the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, likewise, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04411764706 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68013609325 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0632932729 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.916666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426751900511 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150454056267 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607826550752 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254071867154 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282168890579 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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