Expression of opinions is as necessary as oxygen is for survival in a liberated society which should be allowed with a maximum flexibility. These are the innovative thoughts and variety of perceptions, which contributes to make decision making processes more efficient and fruitful. In my opinion, a social structure, where individuals are allowed to share their viewpoints regarding a range of issues, is far more progressive than others.
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Good evening ,
Good evening ,
Please check my essay answer regarding freedom of speech . I dont think score could be such low of just band 1 .i find my ideas relevant to the topic..can you please recheck it once and evaluate again??? Thanks in advance.
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1657 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.362 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.068 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.076 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.599 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Thanks a lot e grader....one
Thanks a lot e grader....one thing more i wanted to know...what is that white space error ??
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ghts, governments can feel the pulse of general public, as expectations and levels of satisfac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gral part of a democratic establishment, where media houses can only work indepen...
^^
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edia houses can only work independently, when they are free from any kind of rest...
^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...strictions imposed on them. However, i do emphasis on the fact that, neither a...
^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itations on such rights. To conclude, people will feel suffocated if their ver...
^^
Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...m. Hence, this privilege should be there , however, strictly supervised.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5498392283 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18443963964 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3956975693 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.285714286 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732770317115 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025884669188 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256763427213 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374947606153 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026317890258 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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