Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem.
What is the cause of freshwater pollution and what measure could government and individual take to respond to this problem?
Nowadays, we are living in a world where a shortage of fresh water resource is a heated topic. In this essay, I will expand some main reasons that cause the clean waters and give some solutions that the government and individual can tackle this predicament.
To begin with, the pressure of increasing significance of population could be the biggest threat of water scarcity. Overpopulation leads to an increase in water demands in agriculture and household. By bad conscience in residency, they regularly discard the waste directly to the environment. it is not difficult to see garbage floating in the river’s surface. this changes To Lich river which used to be as fascinating as the Thames in Italy to one of the most polluted rivers in Hanoi. Furthermore, agriculture and industry could pollute the rest of the water. The amount of garbage which constant the diversity of harmful chemical elements from farm and industrial zone is disposed straight to the environment and influence dramatically on groundwater.
On the other hand, there are some measures to solve the problem described above. it is highly recommended that the government must enforce many strict laws to punish the enterprises which aren’t responsible for the environment. Unfortunately, a lot of companies don’t think about the environment until something goes wrong and they are in breach legislation. In addition, getting involved in water education to enhance the individual’s knowledge about guaranteeing freshwater play a fundamental role. Sometimes, each farmer could dispose of the chemistry properly or limit the amount of pesticide in agriculture to improve water qualification.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that polluted water is coming to the global problem, mainly caused by resident and industrial zone. But I believed that a small action can have big consequences and the government and an individual can easily tackle this predicament
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50986842105 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21408176457 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601973684211 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9907501204 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178758940779 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521418418047 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447802229355 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111612710608 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037525746925 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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