Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?
The psalm" A friend in need is a friend indeed" is still today a bedrock for all friendships, one of the most beautiful relations . As TARS of 'Interstellar ' movie said that we need an honesty level of 90% when dealing with organisms with emotion , it makes our friendly ties more complex , dynamic and special. But even in keeping such a high honesty level, we as humans often tend to mess, often paying a price as great as sacrificing friendship
So all of us wonder what qualities make our friends great , well several points can be rallied to explain this. Firstly every friendship is based on a certain sense of trust. It is that thin line that keeps us together and prevents us from falling apart. Trust in a friendship can be also equated to confidence. Your great friend is compulsorily your confidant. Following trust and confidentiality , we have honesty and candour. If your friend invites you and you turn it down , for some reason there is a mutual understanding amongst the two and such an incident won't scar off the ties. Next quality exhibited is their caring and protective attitude towards the other. If you get a friend who calls you when you reach home after work , that person must be treasured.They celebrate your success as if it was theirs and are always their for you " if it hasn't been your day or month or year".
After recounting several points about a friend's idealisitic qualities , it will be fitting to list some ways that should be avoided as they are deleterious to a well-rooted , deep friendship. Firstly is mistrust. It is that insect if gets struck in the mind of a partner in a friendship gradually eats away the trust and ends the friendship. Next in line is conflict of interest. This is a recurring feature in jobs when one friend gets a job desired by the other and this causes a massive difference amongst friends and stresses their ties . ultimately breaking them. Next problem is out of sight , out of mind. As we move on road of life we leave behind many footprints and after many years it is impossible to retrace them, leading to a conclusive end of our friendly ties .
So friendships , although are dynamic, special , but are very difficult to maintain steadily as there are traps waiting to take us down. Finding a real friend is a momentous feat , and must be treasured if found.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7243902439 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74397332702 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6545178598 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19047619048 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21155752893 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542826099924 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612702484311 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118801522532 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367448680571 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.